What I Would Do Differently

If I would do something differently in my paper, it would be to further describe the importance of Loki witnessing each of Thor’s shame events. I briefly mentioned how Loki’s presence in Thor’s shame has a big impact, but I believe I could have gone more in detail. I also should have included more about my sources and shame theory, and less description of the film itself. I should have only used the film to back up my literature review instead of the opposite. I also could have included a stronger counter argument, and maybe stated other ways Thor resembles shame or maybe provide a thesis stating that he doesn’t experience shame.